Blogger health check 3

Here is feedback on my blogs up until now.

Lorel, your blog is much improved since the last health check and you have responded well to feedback - well done! However, your blog count is quite low for this stage in the project and there are some elements that you could work on in order to continue to improve your current mark as we move into the final stages of the project. You have worked really hard and there is evidence of some good work on the blog so if you can continue to put in the effort in these final stages it could help to improve your final grade. Please read through the feedback below and then complete the to do list / targets at the bottom of the page:

strengths:
- much improved blogging!
- lots of evidence of filming and some reflection
- some nice evidence of drafting and editing
- some nice audience feedback
- beginning to use a greater range of ICT

weaknesses:
- time management and order of posting is a bit haphazard
- use of ICT - sometimes you use it really well and other times not at all, try to be more consistent!
- names you give the post titles - they aren't always clear which task on the check list they refer to and the title doesn't always identify the content of the blog, which is affecting presentation

to do / targets:
1. make sure you complete all ancillary tasks in particular 49/ 50/ 51/ 53/ 54/ 55/ 56 /57/58/60
2. aim to post all remaining tasks in chronological order
3. complete as much research as possible into similar ancillary texts within your genre
4. be creative with your use of ICT - when you use it, it is generally good so continue with it and refer to the list at the back of the blogging checklist to help
5. go back and change the names of the blog posts so that the title clearly reflects what is in the post (and if relevant the name of the blog task on the checklist) 

My own targets: 

Continue to blog and keep up to date. Blog at least twice a week 
Don't be scared to use a range of ICT try out different things even if I think it will be hard to use. If I'm not sure what ICT i could use for a blog, ask! 
Re name blogs