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Friday, 22 January 2016
Thursday, 21 January 2016
Thursday, 14 January 2016
58. Target audience feedback
Below are screenshots of what people in my target audience have commented on either my first album cover, my most recent album cover and a bit on my websiter; These people are aged between 17-18 and all enjpy listening to Uk rap/grime and Uk afrobeats.
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How I've responded to blogging healthcheck 3
Responding to blogging health check 3
Now that we're coming to the final part of the coursework I think it's essential that I respond to the latest advice that's been given to ensure I can get the most marks possible.
Advice given in terms of my weaknesses were:
weaknesses:
- time management and order of posting is a bit haphazard
- use of ICT - sometimes you use it really well and other times not at all, try to be more consistent!
- names you give the post titles - they aren't always clear which task on the check list they refer to and the title doesn't always identify the content of the blog, which is affecting presentation
Now that we're coming to the final part of the coursework I think it's essential that I respond to the latest advice that's been given to ensure I can get the most marks possible.
Advice given in terms of my weaknesses were:
weaknesses:
- time management and order of posting is a bit haphazard
- use of ICT - sometimes you use it really well and other times not at all, try to be more consistent!
- names you give the post titles - they aren't always clear which task on the check list they refer to and the title doesn't always identify the content of the blog, which is affecting presentation
Below are my targets:
to do / targets:
1. make sure you complete all ancillary tasks in particular 49/ 50/ 51/ 53/ 54/ 55/ 56 /57/58/60
2. aim to post all remaining tasks in chronological order
3. complete as much research as possible into similar ancillary texts within your genre
4. be creative with your use of ICT - when you use it, it is generally good so continue with it and refer to the list at the back of the blogging checklist to help
5. go back and change the names of the blog posts so that the title clearly reflects what is in the post (and if relevant the name of the blog task on the checklist)
How I've responded to this feedback is by completing all the ancillary tasks especially the ones I particularly had to complete. I've also completed this in chronological order apart from one or two which is because I had started them from before the others. In terms of my time management I've tried to blog at least twice in the week, this has helped me to keep on track and not panic as much. In terms of ICT I've been experimenting with things I wouldn't usually use. I still need to go back and re name blogs that are unclear
1. make sure you complete all ancillary tasks in particular 49/ 50/ 51/ 53/ 54/ 55/ 56 /57/58/60
2. aim to post all remaining tasks in chronological order
3. complete as much research as possible into similar ancillary texts within your genre
4. be creative with your use of ICT - when you use it, it is generally good so continue with it and refer to the list at the back of the blogging checklist to help
5. go back and change the names of the blog posts so that the title clearly reflects what is in the post (and if relevant the name of the blog task on the checklist)
How I've responded to this feedback is by completing all the ancillary tasks especially the ones I particularly had to complete. I've also completed this in chronological order apart from one or two which is because I had started them from before the others. In terms of my time management I've tried to blog at least twice in the week, this has helped me to keep on track and not panic as much. In terms of ICT I've been experimenting with things I wouldn't usually use. I still need to go back and re name blogs that are unclear
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